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Radio drama, and the music

The whole film told out loud in Croatian, and the two pieces written for it. In English and in Croatian, one file per scene. Nine lines of the new first scene are not yet recorded in Croatian, so they are here to read. Everything can be downloaded.

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THE BRAIN BRAKE, THE WHOLE FILM IN ENGLISH10 scenes, 7 minutes 58 seconds. One file per scene. Beatrice narrates, Edmund is Manan, Hugh is Coach Brain.
10PLAYLIST
101 The road198.24 s
202 The bicycle12.22 s
303 The trainer17.59 s
404 His eyes close1.44 s
505 The passage37.54 s
606 The house and the doors17.71 s
707 Coach Brain's room34.68 s
808 The boards74.11 s
909 The conclusion and the fall43.92 s
1010 The credits41.11 s
71THE WORDS, IN ENGLISH
1. The road
NARRATOR A marathon runner. A long road, an even stride, a man who has done this all his life.
NARRATOR And then we watch him come apart.
NARRATOR His stride breaks. The shoulders drop. The head hangs. The legs stop doing what they are told, and every next step looks like it could be the last one. He stumbles. He goes down.
NARRATOR He is empty. There is nothing left in him, and anyone watching this knows what it looks like when it is over.
NARRATOR And then, at the end of the road, something appears.
NARRATOR And he sees it.
NARRATOR A banner. Stretched across the road. The finish.
NARRATOR And the man who five seconds ago had nothing is sprinting. Head up, shoulders back, the stride short and fast. Sprinting for that banner faster than he ran the whole race.
NARRATOR He runs, and he runs out of the frame.
NARRATOR What is left is empty paper.
NARRATOR Then onto that empty paper comes the thing we saw a moment ago. The man down on the road, stopped, like a photograph somebody has put in front of us to look at.
NARRATOR And into that stopped picture, a boy walks in.
NARRATOR Manan. A magnifying glass in his hand, like somebody who has just arrived at a crime scene. He turns to us, so we can see what he is going to do.
NARRATOR Then he puts the glass on the face. First on the empty face from the beginning. The eye half shut under a heavy brow, the mouth open, the lines cut deep.
NARRATOR Then on the face from the moment he saw something. The head up, the eye wide open, the brows drawn together.
NARRATOR Then on the face after that. The eye calm, the lines softened, a smile at the corner of the mouth.
NARRATOR Three faces of the same man, seconds apart. Nobody gave him anything in between.
NARRATOR And then the thing happens that is the heart of this film. The moment something lets go.
NARRATOR The camera goes into him. The skin turns transparent, like paper you can see through, and underneath it the whole structure shows: muscle, fibre, tendon, all of it woven together and all of it tired. Dead. Grey.
NARRATOR And then it lights up.
NARRATOR One muscle in the calf first, like a wire that has been given current. Then another above it. Then the whole thigh. Light travels up through his body, muscle by muscle, as though somewhere somebody is throwing switches one at a time. What was grey a second ago is burning.
NARRATOR It is not new fuel. Nobody gave him anything. It was there the whole time, only closed, and somebody has just decided to open it.
NARRATOR The skin comes back. The light stays underneath it.
NARRATOR And the man runs out of the frame. What is left is empty paper, the same as the first time.
NARRATOR Where did that come from? The tank was empty. We saw that it was empty.
NARRATOR If the fuel was spent, where did the sprint come from? And if the sprint exists, then the fuel was not spent. Somebody lied.
NARRATOR This is where the film finds its subject. It is not about a man who runs. It is about a boy who wants to know why a man stops, and why he suddenly stops stopping.
2. The bicycle
NARRATOR Curiosity turns into an experiment. He takes the bicycle out into the street and pushes the limit himself, because a question you can ride is better than a question you can only read.
3. The trainer
NARRATOR Then indoors, on the trainer, with his own earlier ride playing on the laptop in front of him. He is racing himself. No opponent, no clock, nobody watching. The only thing he is trying to beat is what his own body did an hour ago. He pushes until he collapses.
4. His eyes close
NARRATOR He closes his eyes.
5. The passage
NARRATOR From that moment the film changes its rules and never changes them back. Before, things came to him. Now nothing arrives and we move instead. Every change of place is a passage through a surface, and there is not one cut left in the film. We fly into his head as the eyes close, through white, and a vortex lifts him up, out of the world.
NARRATOR He arrives at a door that is already giving off light, and he is pulled through it rather than walking in. We draw back, and the house assembles around us, and by the time we can see the whole building the door is already shut. It is a house built out of his own body.
6. The house and the doors
NARRATOR We fly along its corridors. The doors have no names on them. They have shapes pressed into the clay: a muscle, a pair of lungs, a heart. He looks into every room, and in none of them is there anything for him.
NARRATOR Then a door with a key on it. And he goes in.
7. Coach Brain's room
NARRATOR Inside, a small brain in a chair in front of a wall of dials. And he has been expecting him.
NARRATOR Coach Brain says.
COACH BRAIN Ah. There you are. I was expecting you.
COACH BRAIN Before we begin. Raise my right arm.
NARRATOR Manan says.
MANAN I am trying.
NARRATOR Coach Brain says.
COACH BRAIN I know.
NARRATOR Manan says.
MANAN I can't. Why can't I move it?
NARRATOR Coach Brain says.
COACH BRAIN Try now.
NARRATOR Manan says.
MANAN That was you. It was never my arm at all.
NARRATOR Coach Brain says.
COACH BRAIN The arm is always yours. The permission is mine.
8. The boards
NARRATOR Then the two of them take it to the boards. Neither board arrives finished. Manan writes what he was taught in white chalk, line by line. The old theory.
MANAN Nineteen twenty three. Hill puts runners on a treadmill and measures everything they do. His answer is simple. Fatigue is in the muscle.
MANAN You run. The muscle uses up its oxygen. The fuel is spent. And when the tank reads empty, the body stops.
NARRATOR Coach Brain answers on the white board in black marker. The same layout, the same three lines, the same gauge, and every value reversed.
COACH BRAIN Pulse, breath, temperature, water, distance. I read all of it, the whole time. And I ask one question: can we carry on safely?
COACH BRAIN When the answer starts to look like no, I slow you down. So, no. Fatigue is in the brain, not in your legs. Up here. And it decides long before anything is actually in danger.
COACH BRAIN When I stop you, the fuel is still there.
NARRATOR Manan says.
MANAN So the wall...
NARRATOR Coach Brain says.
COACH BRAIN Is a number I chose. Carefully. To keep you alive.
NARRATOR Manan says.
MANAN Then it can be a different number.
9. The conclusion and the fall
NARRATOR They come to the conclusion together. Then the vortex carries him back down, and the key falls with him.
NARRATOR Coach Brain lets it go, and it falls through an empty frame. It turns and grows as it comes, and behind it the whole film runs backwards, so faint it is almost not there. The boards, the room, the house, and the avenue of trees as it lands. The memories are stretched in the direction of the fall because they are passing at speed, but you can still make out what each one is if you look. The key stays sharp, because the camera is falling with it, and that difference is what makes the fall feel fast.
NARRATOR On the way down it crosses from a pencil drawing into a photograph, and no single frame is the moment it becomes real.
NARRATOR Manan catches it at the bottom.
10. The credits
NARRATOR End credits, card to card, through cloud.
NARRATOR And if you step back now and look at the whole film at once, you see that it is a journey. First he runs. Then he rides. Then he flies. He climbs, higher and higher. And then he falls.
NARRATOR That is an old shape, older than film. The hero rises, the hero dies, and the hero comes back with something he did not have before. Manan comes back with a key. And with knowing that the wall is not a wall. It is a setting. A number somebody chose, and it can be changed.
NARRATOR Dedicated to Lord Ganesha. Remover of obstacles.
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THE BRAIN BRAKE, CIJELI FILM10 scena, 7 minuta 53 sekundi. Jedna datoteka po sceni. Gabrijela pripovijeda, Srecko je Manan, Coach Brain je nov. Još 9 rečenica u prvoj sceni čeka Gabrijelu.
10PLAYLIST
101 Cesta159.41 s
202 Bicikl10.51 s
303 Trenažer21.77 s
404 Oči se zatvaraju2.02 s
505 Prolaz41.18 s
606 Kuća i vrata20.14 s
707 Soba Coach Braina43.39 s
808 Ploče80.45 s
909 Zaključak i pad48.29 s
1010 Odjava46.15 s
71RIJEČI, NA HRVATSKOM
1. Cesta
NARATOR Maratonac trči. Duga cesta, ravnomjeran korak, čovjek koji ovo radi cijeli život.
NARATOR I onda ga gledamo kako se raspada.
NARATOR Korak mu se lomi. Ramena padaju. Glava mu visi. Noge više ne slušaju kako treba, i svaki sljedeći korak izgleda kao da bi mogao biti zadnji. Posrće. Pada. Diže se, i trči dalje, ali to više nije trčanje, to je čovjek koji se odbija zaustaviti.
NARATOR Prazan je. Nema više ništa u njemu. Svatko tko ovo gleda zna kako to izgleda kad je gotovo.
NARATOR A onda, na kraju ceste, nešto se pojavi.
NARATOR I on ga vidi.
NARATOR Traka. Natpis preko ceste. Cilj.
NARATOR I čovjek koji prije pet sekundi nije imao ništa, sada sprinta. Glava gore, ramena natrag, korak kratak i brz. Sprinta prema traci brže nego što je trčao cijelu utrku.
NARATOR Trči, i istrči van kadra. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Ostane prazan papir. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Onda se na taj prazan papir vrati prizor od maloprije. Čovjek dolje na cesti, zaustavljen, kao fotografija koju je netko stavio pred nas da je pogledamo. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR A u taj zaleđeni kadar ušeta dječak.
NARATOR Manan. S povećalom u ruci, kao netko tko je upravo ušao na mjesto zločina. Okrene se prema nama, da vidimo što će raditi. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Pa stavi povećalo na lice. Prvo na ono prazno lice s početka. Oko poluzatvoreno pod teškom obrvom, usta otvorena, crte urezane duboko. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Pa na lice iz trenutka kad je nešto vidio. Glava gore, oko širom otvoreno, obrve skupljene. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Pa na lice poslije toga. Oko mirno, crte omekšale, osmijeh u kutu usana. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Tri lica istog čovjeka, u razmaku od nekoliko sekundi. Nitko mu ništa nije dao između njih. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR A onda se dogodi ono što je srce ovog filma. Trenutak u kojem se nešto otpusti.
NARATOR Kamera ulazi u njega. Koža postaje prozirna, kao da je papir kroz koji se vidi, i pod njom se ukaže cijela građa: mišići, vlakna, tetive, sve isprepleteno i sve umorno. Mrtvo. Sivo.
NARATOR I onda se upali.
NARATOR Prvo jedan mišić u listu, kao žica koja je dobila struju. Pa drugi, iznad njega. Pa cijelo bedro. Svjetlo putuje kroz njegovo tijelo, od stopala prema gore, mišić po mišić, kao da negdje netko jedan po jedan pušta prekidače. Ono što je sekundu prije bilo sivo, sada gori.
NARATOR Nije to novo gorivo. Nije mu nitko ništa dao. To je bilo tu cijelo vrijeme, samo zatvoreno, i netko je upravo odlučio otvoriti.
NARATOR Koža se vraća. Svjetlo ostaje ispod nje.
NARATOR I čovjek otrči van kadra. Ostane prazan papir, kao i prvi put. [još nije snimljeno]
NARATOR Odakle mu to? Spremnik je bio prazan. Vidjeli smo da je bio prazan.
NARATOR Ako je gorivo bilo potrošeno, odakle sprint? A ako sprint postoji, onda gorivo nije bilo potrošeno. Netko je lagao.
NARATOR Ovdje film dobiva svoju temu. Nije riječ o čovjeku koji trči, nego o dječaku koji želi znati zašto čovjek stane, i zašto odjednom prestane stajati.
2. Bicikl
NARATOR Radoznalost postaje pokus. Izvodi bicikl na ulicu i sam gura granicu, jer pitanje na kojem možeš voziti bolje je od pitanja koje možeš samo čitati.
3. Trenažer
NARATOR Onda u sobi, na trenažeru, s vlastitom ranijom vožnjom koja se vrti na laptopu pred njim. Utrkuje se sam sa sobom. Nema protivnika, nema sata, nitko ne gleda. Jedino što pokušava pobijediti jest ono što je njegovo vlastito tijelo napravilo prije sat vremena. Gura dok se ne sruši.
4. Oči se zatvaraju
NARATOR Zatvara oči.
5. Prolaz
NARATOR Od tog trenutka film mijenja svoja pravila i više ih ne vraća. Prije su stvari dolazile k njemu. Sada ništa ne dolazi, nego se mi krećemo. Svaka promjena mjesta je prolazak kroz površinu, i u filmu više nema nijednog reza. Ulijećemo mu u glavu dok se oči zatvaraju, kroz bijelo, i vrtlog ga podiže prema gore, izvan svijeta.
NARATOR Stiže pred vrata koja već svijetle, i biva uvučen kroz njih umjesto da ušeta. Odmičemo se, i kuća se sklapa oko nas, a dok vidimo cijelu zgradu vrata su već zatvorena. To je kuća sagrađena od njegova vlastitog tijela.
6. Kuća i vrata
NARATOR Letimo njezinim hodnicima. Vrata nemaju imena na sebi. Imaju oblike utisnute u glinu: mišić, pluća, srce. Zaviruje u svaku sobu, i ni u jednoj nema ničega za njega.
NARATOR Onda vrata s ključem na sebi. I ulazi.
7. Soba Coach Braina
NARATOR Unutra, mali mozak u stolici pred zidom punim brojčanika. I on ga je čekao.
NARATOR Coach Brain kaže.
COACH BRAIN Ah. Tu si. Očekivao sam te.
COACH BRAIN Prije nego počnemo. Podigni mi desnu ruku.
NARATOR Manan kaže.
MANAN Pokušavam.
NARATOR Coach Brain kaže.
COACH BRAIN Znam.
NARATOR Manan kaže.
MANAN Ne mogu. Zašto je ne mogu pomaknuti?
NARATOR Coach Brain kaže.
COACH BRAIN Probaj sada.
NARATOR Manan kaže.
MANAN To si bio ti. Nikada to nije ni bila moja ruka.
NARATOR Coach Brain kaže.
COACH BRAIN Ruka je uvijek tvoja. Dopuštenje je moje.
8. Ploče
NARATOR Onda njih dvojica to iznose na ploče. Nijedna ploča ne dolazi gotova. Manan bijelom kredom piše ono što su ga učili, redak po redak. Stara teorija.
MANAN Tisuću devetsto dvadeset treća. Hill stavlja trkače na traku i mjeri sve što rade. Njegov odgovor je jednostavan. Umor je u mišiću.
MANAN Trčiš. Mišić troši svoj kisik. Gorivo se potroši. I kad spremnik pokaže prazno, tijelo stane.
NARATOR Coach Brain odgovara na bijeloj ploči crnim markerom. Isti raspored, ista tri retka, isti mjerač, i svaka vrijednost obrnuta.
COACH BRAIN Puls, dah, temperatura, voda, udaljenost. Čitam sve to, cijelo vrijeme. I postavljam jedno pitanje: možemo li nastaviti sigurno?
COACH BRAIN Kad odgovor počne izgledati kao ne, usporim te. Dakle ne. Umor je u mozgu, a ne u tvojim nogama. Ovdje gore. I odlučuje mnogo prije nego što je išta stvarno u opasnosti.
COACH BRAIN Kad te ja zaustavim, gorivo je još uvijek tu.
NARATOR Manan kaže.
MANAN Znači zid...
NARATOR Coach Brain kaže.
COACH BRAIN Je broj koji sam ja odabrao. Pažljivo. Da te održim na životu.
NARATOR Manan kaže.
MANAN Onda to može biti i drugi broj.
9. Zaključak i pad
NARATOR Dolaze do zaključka zajedno. Onda ga vrtlog nosi natrag dolje, i ključ pada s njim.
NARATOR Coach Brain ga pušta, i on pada kroz prazan kadar. Okreće se i raste dok dolazi, a iza njega se cijeli film vrti unatrag, tako blijedo da ga gotovo nema. Ploče, soba, kuća, i drvored dok slijeće. Sjećanja su razvučena u smjeru pada jer prolaze brzinom, ali još uvijek možeš razabrati što je svako od njih ako pogledaš. Ključ ostaje oštar, jer kamera pada s njim, i ta razlika je ono što čini da pad djeluje brzo.
NARATOR Na putu prema dolje prelazi iz crteža olovkom u fotografiju, i nijedan pojedini kadar nije trenutak u kojem postaje stvaran.
NARATOR Manan ga hvata na dnu.
10. Odjava
NARATOR Odjavna špica, od kartice do kartice, kroz oblake.
NARATOR I ako se sada odmakneš i pogledaš cijeli film odjednom, vidiš da je to putovanje. Prvo trči. Onda vozi. Onda leti. Uspinje se, sve više i više. A onda pada.
NARATOR To je stari oblik, stariji od filma. Junak se uzdiže, junak umire, i junak se vraća s nečim što prije nije imao. Manan se vraća s ključem. I sa spoznajom da zid nije zid, nego postavka. Broj koji je netko odabrao, i koji se može promijeniti.
NARATOR Posvećeno Gospodinu Ganeshi. Uklonitelju prepreka.
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THE MUSIC, WRITTEN FOR THE FILMTheme song and end credits. Composed before the animation.
2PLAYLIST
Theme song Composed for the film. The first half lives in this.
1Theme song161.0 s
End credits Composed for the film. Plays under the credit cards and the dedication.
2End credits52.0 s

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